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Thea replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Interesting article, Sandra. I agree that many people have a tendency to downplay their work, to lower the expectation of the reader / viewer, as a sort of safety mechanism. And, as Squidge said, there are those who take this to the extreme and are really fishing for compliments.
You make a good point, Sandra re the story challenges being a good…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Felt the pressure building up as I read and the dam burst at this line ‘Within twenty four hours enough people from Mousehole had volunteered to form a new crew…’Not a good look when you’re in the restaurant car park waiting for your sister.
Seriously, there are no other group of people who earn this much of my respect.
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RichardB replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
I can understand how this man feels, but I also remember that the coxswain turned away some of those who did make it to the lifeboat station. Who’s to say he might not have been one of them?
If you want to experience the full admiration for the courage of those men, you need to watch that BBC film and listen to Russell Smith’s eyewitness account…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Another possibility is that the waves were so big that in a trough the Solomon Brown literally hit the seabed. If I’m ever up Whitby way I’ll definitely see about a ride on their Watson lifeboat.
There’s a decent collection of historic lifeboats at the dockyard at Chatham. I’ve a feeling they have a couple of Watson-type boats there but it seems…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
The BBC documentary gives the false impression (without actually saying so) that the moment that transmission broke off was the end of the Solomon Browne. That makes for an emotional moment in the programme, but was not the case, since it was seen afterwards. For what it’s worth, I believe that it suffered another violent impact with the Union…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Truly terrifying conditions. I am sorry it was such a sad end for so many people.
Very well-told tale, Richard. Thank you.
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Daedalus replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Superb blog tinged with tragedy, and, as always told with clarity and sympathy. For all the improvements in hardware and technology, RNLI operations can still be phenomenally dangerous. Operating in those conditions, that close to shore… Reading the account reminded me of The Perfect Storm by Sebastian Junger (great book, but don’t bother with…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Interesting. I think sometimes, ‘It’s not quite there yet’ can sound like an apology, when it’s actually the admittance of a mature (by which I mean you know yourself and your writing) author, who realises that something created in such a short space of time needs more work. I’ve done it myself!
But of course it takes time to build that…[Read more]
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John S Alty replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Excellent, Richard.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
That should be IT didn’t disappoint!
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JaneShuff replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Logged into the Den and saw that you’d written another of your fascinating blogs, Richard, so I went and made myself a cup of tea and settled down for a good read. I didn’t disappoint. Fascinating story and I must confess to having damp eyes at the end. You’ve got a real knack of telling these tales in an interesting and moving way. Thanks Jane
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Jonathan replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I read something a while ago on “how to accept compliments” or something to that effect. The temptation to say “oh, no, it’s not very good, it’s nothing” is, as I understand it, to be resisted, using a simple “thank you” in its place. Doing this has, for me, changed the way I see myself a little, from impostor playing at “being artistic” to…[Read more]
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Jonathan replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Will definitely watch that video – thanks for this.
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RichardB started the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
The older I get the more disenchanted I become with my fellow humans. I look at the dishonesty, greed, hate and stupidity that seem to fill the news and I despair. One reason I live in a small village halfway up a South Welsh mountain is to get away from all the shit. But in the increasing misanthropy of my old age there is still one group of…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Phillippa: that sounds a very good attitude to develop,thanks.
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Well done. that is worth a celebration.
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Booyakasha! How did you do it?
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Congratulations.
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Spotting my verbal tics and searching out specific words. I knew I use “that” a lot but that (ha ha) was the tip of the iceberg. Just, up, down, seems, etc etc – OMG. Plus cutting bits where I did not resist the urge to explain.
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Oh, nice work! All those little pesky words. And all that RUE-ing.
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Philippa East replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Such an interesting thread, Sandra.
I think the most helpful advice I read on this theme was the point that it is not my job to judge whether my work is good or bad. Who am I to say whether someone else’s mind will or won’t be blown? That’s up to them.
My job as author is to write the damn piece to the very best of my ability, and then to put it…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I realised that, when in the habit of being ready and willing to apologise, I was giving myself an excuses to fail.
Joining groups such as the Cloud, partaking in story challenges – stretching myself so as not to embarrass myself, judging my work against the very varied submissions of others, and trusting that my peers will give it the respect t…[Read more] -
John S Alty replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
You have to blow your own trumpet, no-one is going to blow it for you.
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