Knicks

  • Goodness. This one was really tricky, and then it spiralled off in a direction I hadn’t planned.

    Has anyone else tried these “I Don’t Remembers?” That extra layer of knowingness or irony pushes it into different territory, for me.

    I don’t remember not knowing how to wash blood out of cotton
    I don’t remember if my mother told me, in pale wor…[Read more]

  • Just a quick reminder that you have until Friday midnight to get your entries for this month’s competition (around 400 words on the theme of The Future interpreted in any way you wish). I know some of you, like me, are fighting to finish your entries for the Winter Competition but can I tempt those of you who are sitting back and basking in the…[Read more]

  • Squidge replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 3 months ago

    Skylark! Hullo! So glad you’re here with us after such a long and difficult break. I’m not around here as often as I’d like to be either, but it’s lovely to know that the Den’s still here, even if I’m not.

    First drafts are a pain, aren’t they, when you revisit and find all the issues you missed in the excitement of getting it down initially.…[Read more]

    • Thanks, Sandra. I must buy one of Emma’s books. I keep meaning to.

      • Her ‘Not a book about -‘ is excellent on the difficulties of writing, and ‘The Mathematics of love’ one I aim to re-read annually. Time I re-read the other one …

        • Shame on me, I haven’t read either of the novels, but yes, ‘Not a Book About…’ is excellent. And in this blog Emma, as usual, hits the nail on the head. That last bit, ‘To Be Heard’… yes, absolutely. After I resigned myself to ‘A faint hope of being read, maybe just a silly dream, but still…’ becoming ‘No hope’ my motivation drained away.

  • KazG replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 3 months ago

    I’m SURE she will @skylark 🙂

    I think all second book doubts/worries are very normal and to be expected, especially with a big change eg of voice. But push those doubts aside and let that shittiness have its day. It’s all part of the process (and shitty first drafts are always so entertaining to look back on!).

  • WELCOME HOME, MANDY!!!!

    So great to have you back. I have been wondering how you’ve been getting on. I know a lot has gone on for you.

    I’m pleased you’re engaging with your draft. It’s rough, that point int he process!

    Power to your elbow…

  • Looking to a Brighter Future

    Me old bones ache, Vee, sitting here hour-on-hour, gawping at you in that hospital bed. Look how quiet you are; how still. Niver would’ve stayed so still in the old days, hey? Specially when we first met, at the rockabilly café, remember? Shaking the floor dancing and, later, rocking the back of my old Cortina, you sh…[Read more]

  • @raine Hello! Yes, I think I’ve solved it, though it would help if everyone could just accept that in the first few chapters of my novel, Thursday becomes Friday without anyone sleeping 😀

    @kazg Hello to you too! I’m feeling a bit of second book pressure, mainly because Home had the USP of a child’s voice and this one doesn’t have that so I’m…[Read more]

  • @libby I didn’t for a long time (esp with Twitter) and now I have, it’s hard to switch off from it as it is addictive. But I think I’m learning to manage it better to get the best bits out of it without the worst bits dragging me down.

    @janeshuff I’m sorry you and your family have been through a similar thing. It does change everything. I hope…[Read more]

  • KazG replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 3 months ago

    Hello @skylark! and everyone else! How nice to see you all here having a chat. Exciting about your second book Mandy, I’m sure it’ll be a cracker. Are you feeling any of those second book pressures after a successful book 1? I loved Jessika so much – in fact there is a wonderful book shop here, my local one luckily, called Brunswick Bound. They…[Read more]

  • Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 3 months ago

    @Raine I like that quote (it reminds me of the fake George Orwell one). Whether it helps or not is a different question, but as Joseph Conrad pointed out, ‘action is consolatory’.

    @skylark I’ve been following your family’s journey when you’ve posted on Facebook and I can’t begin to express my admiration. The strength conferred by love is…[Read more]

  • Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 3 months ago

    @libby my take on it has always been that the laxative story is apocryphal. I think you’d have to ingest an awful lot of the stuff to have any effect, and the diffusion of the oil in the exhaust would make that difficult. One version I heard was that there were all sorts of things likely to have a laxative effect on pilots of that era – alcohol…[Read more]

  • Raine replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 3 months ago

    Hello @skylark my lovely. Great to see you venturing back in. I’m not a big presence here, but I do love being able to come in and know I’ll find friends. Hope the second draft continuity glitch is resolving itself. Who needs continuity anyway? I think most things temporal should be banned from novels. Really, why do days of the week need to…[Read more]

  • Raine replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 3 months ago

    The Brexit Blues. Ugh. Yes. And the Climate Change existential fear. And the daughter-entering-teen-sexual-harrassment-age dread. I tell you, grown men eyeing up a twelve year old girl makes me very VERY stabby.
    But, yes, Brexit and the fundamental damage to our society that seems to have come about have had (are having) an effect on my general…[Read more]

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 3 months ago

    It must have been an awful time @skylark. We have been through a similar experience with our youngest grandson and it has changed everything particularly for his mum. But how wonderful that both you and @daedalus found writing helped.

  • Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 3 months ago

    Hi @Libby – I can recommend trying to channel the emotions from current affairs into writing, although I think you have to be in a reasonably strong state to do it. It can be hard to write anything much when life has you beaten down.

    Ah, oil in biplanes! I don’t know about linseed oil, but castor oil was a very common lubricant for early…[Read more]

  • I know that Brexit and politics in general has had an impact on my writing because I found myself getting more and more sucked into arguing on Facebook and Twitter and that, I have come to realise, is the worse kind of political discussion because there is never any nuance. It is all so polarised. But I found it hard to switch off from and it…[Read more]

  • Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 3 months ago

    I agree that the political situation over the last few years has been difficult and distracting. I suspect it has affected both my writing and my mental health.

    I can name one effect Brexit has had directly on my writing. On the night of the referendum, I had run out of time to finish the William the Conqueror novel I was co-writing with…[Read more]

  • JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 3 months ago

    You have got the premise right @Libby although I don’t think the two soldiers are despatch drivers. To me it just came across as unlikely that only two low ranking soldiers would be sent to cross miles of dangerous territory with no particular plan and little chance of success but maybe it was supposed to show how useless, confused and uncaring…[Read more]

  • What a wholly satisfying tale Libby. Thank you.

  • Load More