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Daedalus replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Only just got to this. Great stuff. Works by itself or could be part of something longer. I had a couple of comments and then I realised there was an updated version that had addressed them. Great voice, and I love Florence’s, ahem, sangfroid and acerbic wit.
Tiny editing thing – Medical Corps rather than Corp.
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JaneShuff posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
I saw a pod of dolphins playing at the end of the peninsula we live on today. So excited!!
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Wow, that’s brilliant. So lucky. I’ve only seen dolphins twice, both times because I happened to be looking in the right place when they breached. Did you get a good view?
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Oh wow! I’m not jealous. Not at all. No, I refuse to be …. bloody hell, I’m jealous.
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It was a truly magical thing. They did all that leaping out of the water together stuff that they’re supposed to do.
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Oh, fabulous. The only time I’ve seen dolphins was at Kaikoura in NZ, and the leaping and playing is amazing to see.
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That sounds magical. I’ve not seen them other than from a tourist boat in Tenerife, which really isn’t the same thing.
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YAY for dolphins @janeshuff!! They are just the most amazing creatures. (Apart from bats, obv). Have never got over the buzz of seeing them however often I’ve done so.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Chapter seven – a spider's path in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
I really enjoy this Sophie. I thought it really came alive when we were inside the room and inside his head. Really compelling internal monologue, lots of info and hints at info contained within the that but none of it telegraphed. Just enough to intrigue and pull you in. You do this sort of ‘dark underbelly’ of society so well.
I think the oth…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Den monthly competition September 2018 in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 10 months ago
Bonjour
When we lived in La Rochelle, my governess tried to make me say ‘Bonjour,’ to people we met in the street. It was polite she said, I would never be a gentleman if I did not learn to be polite. But I was shy, and after our morning walk she would scold me, and shake me impatiently. Papa was away at the war and Maman was – distant. I knew s…[Read more]
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Debi Alper replied to the topic A Brief History of York Festivals in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
I’ve blogged about FoW but it’s pix only, I’m afraid, and they’re in an odd order but I don’t have time to faff. What an awesome weekend for Denizens it was. We raised several glasses (each) to absent friends.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Contract finally sorted! in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
This is wonderful news CJ. Important step on the road – I suspect the fact is has taken a long time is a good thing. Beware the quickly sorted contract.
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Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
Started out writing a blog about the sorry tale of my first novel, disappointing publishing experience, imploding publisher and legal battle to recover my rights. Has turned into a three-part series…
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Daedalus replied to the topic Book 2 of Oath and Crown out soon in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Yes, Flying to the Edge. It’s a slight connection, but it’s there
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Daedalus replied to the topic Book 2 of Oath and Crown out soon in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
@jillybean Odo the bishop of Bayeux or Odo the lurcher?
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Daedalus replied to the topic Book 2 of Oath and Crown out soon in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Wow, thanks Richard, thanks all. I’d be interested to hear how a back-to-back read feels, actually. The two books were written together in the first instance, although there was a lot of editing in the mean time, so it ought to work as a flowing narrative. The second one definitely has the advantage of pace – the history definitely felt as though…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Yeah. I recommend not posting Thompson’s regime as writing advice
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Daedalus replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Anquetil had a comment for that, too – it was something along the lines of ‘you expect us to do what we do on mineral water alone?’
If there was a performance enhancing drug for writing, I’d be sorely tempted by it right now. (Not sure Hunter S Thompson’s idea of such a thing counts, btw)
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Daedalus replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Well that’s just unreasonable WB 😉
Jacques Anquetil, first five time winner of the Tour de France was once asked what advice he’d give aspiring bike racers. ‘Ride a bike, ride a bike, ride a bike’ was his answer. The equivalent for aspiring writers could be ‘write a book, write a book, write a book’.
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Debi Alper replied to the topic Contract finally sorted! in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
*air punch* Yes, publishing moves at a glacial pace but this is a fabulous stride forwards – at last. I saw your lovely agent at York, though we didn’t have a chance to chat. I do know how much she adores you though. (Don’t we all!) xx
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Contract finally sorted! in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Huge congratulations CJ. Faberoo
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Daedalus posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
Don’t forget to have a look in the ‘competitions etc’ thread in the main forum, people – lots of opportunities for competitions and publication, and the first monthly Den competition. No entries yet, but still two and a half weeks to post something on the theme of New…[Read more]
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