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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
@alanr Alan you CAN edit – the pale grey bar with date above your original post has am even paler REPLY on it, RH end.
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Sophie Jonas-Hill replied to the topic Wip beginning… in the forum Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
I really want to read more of this and work out what’s going on, but I feel this opener is on the way to being something amazing, but isn’t quite there yet. I loved the writing style when you really pushed it and were bold, when you were writing almost in a voice of god style, and could have read a lot more of it. For me, it then focuses in a bit…[Read more]
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Sophie Jonas-Hill started the topic First chapter – Spider's path in the forum Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
Hi – I thought people might be interested to have a crack at the first chapter – would you want to read more?
CHAPTER ONE
Moments ago he was on the road, with its solitary pools of street-light and the hush-hush sound of cars. He only turned off the path because he was sure that was the way though, and because the map made it seem easy, but now…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Den monthly competition September 2018 in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 7 months ago
Summer 1999
I told myself, at my age, I didn’t need to be nervous. But knew what I could do well was conscientious.
‘Bring portfolio’ the letter said, so I went out and bought a huge one. Filled it, with two years of one-day a week class-work plus evening Life Drawing. Plus the watercolours I was especially pleased with.
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Athelstone replied to the topic A Room with a View in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
It’s not. The chit chat thread is over in the Challenge Group “A Room with a View” but as all votes count – so does yours!
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Sandra posted an update in the group
A Room with a View 7 years, 7 months agoWe’re writers. aren’t we? HAS to be mean!
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Athelstone replied to the topic A Room with a View in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
OK – this is really important. This is NEW, this is a TWIST and this is IMPORTANT.
The choices you have made, are making and are still free to change can have an impact on the way you write your story. However, one of the choices may have a surprising effect depending on whether I am GENEROUS or MEAN. And the surprise may not be expected. So –…[Read more]
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Elle replied to the topic Wip beginning… in the forum Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
I enjoy reading this, I get a Station Eleven vibe from it (that’s a good thing) in terms of setting the apocalyptic atmosphere and hinting that something’s coming however I think it might be a bit too much setting up in one go for my liking and I’m not overly fond of the omniscient narrator style (but that’s a personal preference of mine). I agree…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Pitching opportunity for northern writers in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 7 months ago
Histfic can definitely have mainstream appeal. Seems as though one of Juliet Mushens’ biggest successes as an agent recently was with The Miniaturist. Though I gather Juliet is interested in history. The blogpost about how that novel was pitched to her is interesting. I think the link was posted somewhere around here. Go for it
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Elle replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 7 months ago
@Daedalus – thanks!
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