Sophie Jonas-Hill

Hi Raine,

Thanks for reading and for your feedback, it is really useful.

I like your suggestion about adding tension and about trying. My idea was to show what happens when you stop trying and how quickly things can spiral if you don’t reach out to people, but I think I can work out hints at failed attempts and create some more tension.

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Whoohoo! Congratulations!

Wow, well done Philippa! Although I’m not in the least bit surprised 😉

Thanks guys!

That is brilliant, Philippa! Good luck, and have a great Festival!

Fab news, Philippa – will have everything crossed for you!

I found @denofwriters on twitter, followed, but now can’t find it any more. Umm?

Ah no, he was the very last to join!

Welcome Graeme and Louise!

Yes a space for a mini CV would be nice.

Also, my browser tab for Den Of Writers has a blank icon – it’s called a favicon there are instructions for how to set it here https://stackoverflow.com/questions/4888377/how-to-add-a-browser-tab-icon-favicon-for-a-website – simplest method is to get the icon perhaps as a PNG file, rename the file to…[Read more]

The competition group was open, so I don’t think there’s a problem posting the names of those who had already signed up here. Several are already here, but it would be great to see whether we could get the rest. I worry about one or two who may not be quite so internet-savvy and I tend to take Barny’s point – it would be a great shame not to…[Read more]

Hi Elle / L.

I like this, I think the use of “you” works, and I like how each section is a little vignette giving further insights into how she is in different relationships. I like how you cover not only the submission in the sexual / intimate side, but across the board – hobbies, food types, etc. It’s heartbreaking how she wants the “right”…[Read more]