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Squidge replied to the topic On a more positive note… in the forum Blogs 8 years, 1 month ago
Thanks, Gipps – and you should see my scrap bag! I’m sure there’s at least another quilt in there trying to get out, plus a couple of sets of squares that I need to do something with…
Next quilting project is one for my son – I’m aiming to get it done by the time he goes to uni. Which gives me a year…eeek!!
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Elle replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Thank you @Daedalus — I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Elle replied to the topic Red (short story – 2,600 words) in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Philippa, that’s really useful especially your feedback about the scene after the big turning point, I can see how it can feel flat compared to what’s just before so I’m reworking it making it shorter and more to the point.
Also I’ll try to work it some more “wolf” reference about Jezza, maybe referring to him as the leader of the pack or…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Den of Writers – Forum Feedback in the forum Admin and Technical 8 years, 1 month ago
The easiest way to protect your writing from unwanted attention is to set up a private group. Explain what it’s about in the description and then people can ask to join or you can invite them.
That’s one reason why the writing challenge group A Room with a View will be changed to a private group as soon as writing begins.
If you are really…[Read more]
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Elle replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years, 1 month ago
When writing that painful 1st draft always remember Hemingway wise words: “The first draft of anything is shit.”
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Squidge replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years, 1 month ago
Choose ring bound notebooks to scribble ideas in; you’ll never lose your pen if you keep one clipped down the inside of the rings…
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Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Jane – yes, this is the start of number 2…
Will have a think about the success bit… If two peeps think it, you might well have a point. 😉
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Daedalus replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Wow, that’s a heck of a story Elle. Absolutely stunning from first line to last
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Squidge posted an update 8 years, 1 month ago
We used to have a place for Writing Prompts on the cloud…can’t remember where. Is there any mileage in having the same here? And if so, is the Lifeboat the best place for it? Happy to kick one off if folks want it – I’m heading to NIBS tonight and there’s a couple of corkers we’re going to be using…
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Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Oh I see! Sort of a ‘how much longer is she going to keep trying this?’ vibe?
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Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Kate, Mad.
Actually, I reckon your way would work too, Mad. I suppose it depends what it is you’re trying to emphasise in the opener – for me, it was the fact that Tilda’s been trying to get this bloomin’ illuminorb right for so long, whereas depending on how you worded the next bit, your suggestion might focus attention on Silviu and his…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic On a more positive note… in the forum Blogs 8 years, 1 month ago
Ta, Jules. I’m working on the theory that this quilt can be reversible, in that the visible spirals on the ‘back’ are just as lovely as the mixed coloured stripes on the ‘front’. A lot still to do though.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Nice one, well done Elle 🙂 Just off to have a read
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Elle replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years, 1 month ago
Actually had a piece published today on Reflex Fiction if anybody wants to have a read, here’s the link:
https://www.reflexfiction.com/a-ghost-story-flash-fiction-by-laure-van-rensburg/
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Daedalus replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years, 1 month ago
Good idea, Mad. Can’t think of anything right now, but will rack my brains. Would be great to see others’ suggestions
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Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
Apologies for the formatting! That’ll teach me to cut and paste…
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Squidge started the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
…how does this grab you?
It wasn’t until her twenty-seventh attempt that Tilda finally managed to produce her first illuminorb.
And a good job, too, because by the twenty-sixth attempt, Silviu’s patience was wearing very thin. “Concentrate, Tilda,” the Ambakian powermage snapped.
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Squidge started the topic On a more positive note… in the forum Blogs 8 years, 1 month ago
Just to make up for the rather morose blog I shared a few days ago about the demise of the cloud, here’s one that is decidedly more upbeat. And has nothing to do with writing except for having a shout-out for the Den!
(Promise I won’t post tons of Scribbles links – I’ll only post the writingy ones from here on in!)
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