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John S Alty replied to the topic Monthly comp: Feb 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
OK, I’ll go first:
Sunday morning
A late breakfast, tea and toast, the paper folded at the cryptic crossword. 22 down, Kathmandu hippie hospital, 9 letters. Michael scratched his head with the pen. Just an average Sunday.
The doorbell rang, startling him. Nobody called on Sunday. Nobody called on any other day for that matter, not since he’d p…[Read more] -
Raine posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago
Anyone going to @bric‘s launch tomorrow – I’ll see you there!! 🙂 🙂
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Wish I was, but no. Have a wonderful time!
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I’m going – it’s just up the road from me. See you there!
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I chickened out of going on my own. Have a great time!
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Had planned to but going to the Edinburgh one instead.
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Wish I was but still can’t manage long journies 🙁 I’ll be there in spirit.
Hope everybody has a brilliant day!-
Can report – it was a great night. Books AND cake, and fellow writers.
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Colour me jealous! I’m sure it was brilliant.
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Congratulations, Fiona!!
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Kate replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
Thanks, Sandra.
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KazG replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
Congratulations @elle! You seem to be on a roll 🙂
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KazG replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Hooray, the more the merrier! I’ve sent you both invites and I see you’ve settled in already Squidge 🙂
@squidge that doesn’t make you stupid, I did exactly the same thing the first time I did NaNo 🙂
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
Congratulations, elle!!
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Elle replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
I’ve had a couple of flash published.
https://spelkfiction.com/2019/03/29/lilith/
http://www.femininecollective.com/why-female-fireflies-fake-death/
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Elle replied to the topic Writers & Artists short story comp in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
Congratulations! Completely deserved.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
I was thinking a PM to the setter would be the easiest way, and not putting too much responsibility on a smallish group of people, but we can always try it for a while and see how it goes.
An alternating competitive-non competitive challenge is an option, but how would we decide who set the prompt for the non-competitive months?
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
Just checked with Steve and apparently an 18 year old is limited to bikes of no more than 125 cc – nippy enough to weave through London traffic, but max speed of ~60mph (and not as nippy as the twist’n’go scooters beloved by street thieves) Once he’s 19 and had has 2 years experience he can go larger.
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Squidge replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Just to prove how stupid I am – did not realise that the camp didn’t let you post anything until the official start of the writing period. But at least I know where to find the thing to log word count – even if it’s not appearing yet.
Can you tell I’ve not done this before? *face plant*
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Jonathan replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
This all sounds good, though I’m not entirely sure how the peer judging would work. Would everyone send scores to the setter, or just people who have volunteered to judge, or some other subgroup?
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
Steve is out – on his BSA B33 – today, I’ll ask him when he returns.
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Kate replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
That would be a nice touch, Sandra. He’s 18 and it’s his pride and joy.
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
Kate, it also crossed my mind, on first reading, that Alex would’ve referred to his bike by make: ‘his Ducati 500 Hornet’ (or something – I made that up). If you want some better info than I have about modern bikes I can find out, but need to know how old he is – there might be rules about what cc a bike for what age.
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Kate replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
I do that too, Sandra.
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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 1 month ago
Intriguing and likely valuable exercise on Andrew Wille’s blog which I’m determined to have a go at sometime this month: http://wille.org/blog/2019/03/29/heart-words-vs-head-words-guest-writing-experiment-no-73-from-zoe-gilbert/
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Thanks Sandra, that’s really interesting. Latin root strikes me as the language when someone’s trying too hard, and it has the opposite effect.
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Oh that’s interesting, Sandra. I went to Andrew’s ‘Crafting Your Prose’ masterclass yesterday, and that was one of the topics we covered.
I can thoroughly recommend: https://www.wordsaway.info
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
Then ‘mate’ worked, don’t fret – the trouble with reading to critique is that one tries too hard and focuses on unnecessaries.
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Woolleybeans replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Ok, I joined the camp.
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Kate replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Sandra. The ‘mate’ was an attempt to show gender. Always tricky in first person. I’ve never been on a motorbike so your observations are most useful, as are your suggested tweaks. Much appreciated.
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