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Daedalus replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Read some of those stories, @johnalty – superb stuff, all with a strong, distinct voice. Even a couple of twists. Looking forward to finding @elle‘s stuff too
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Fiona replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Absolutely FANTASTIC! I cannot express how delighted I am! Ada is brilliant and her story deserves to be told and filmed and …. oh I am so happy!
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Debi Alper replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Kaz! KAAAAAZZZZ! This is utterly brilliant news. I’m so delighted and excited for you. You’re absolutely right to have an agent too, even though you’ve already got what most people want from an agent. As soon as there’s somewhere online that I can link to, I’ll be adding you to the Self-Edit Hall of Fame. Lots of you are already listed there.…[Read more]
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Clebs replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Thatโs brilliant news. Congratulations!
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Jules replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Thabks for the shout out, Kaz 😊 it was your talent and perseverence that won the day though xxx
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KazG replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
You’re all brilliant. Thank you so much for your really heartwarming comments. I keep reading them with (another) stupid grin on my face.
And I have been VERY remiss in not singling out two members of the previous Cloud for special thanks – @debi and Emma Darwin, who run the phenomenally excellent Self Editing your Novel course – which first…[Read more]
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Elle started the topic Red (short story – 2,600 words) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
Sorry me again! I promise this is the last one from me for a while. As usual always looking for any feedback or suggestions you might have or if you spot any of those mistakes I keep missing.
Thanks!
CAUTION: some violence and some sexual content
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She perched herself on a barstool, relieved not to have to stand on those…[Read more]
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Jules replied to the topic Friends in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
There are two things it does do, John.
1 – it forms one of the filters on what you want to see on the main wall (Activity tab on main menu). You can toggle through the sub menu and choose to only see what friends have said. Right now we’re a small forum of 70 but if we hit a couple of 1000 of active users, you might very well prefer to just see…[Read more]
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John S Alty replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
You mean the coppery tang of blood as her scalpel slices through pale flesh?! Just kidding. I know what you mean, Laure, I need to work on the atmosphere.
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John S Alty started the topic Friends in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 8 months ago
Can someone explain this “friends” thing? I have seen it on other forums, so I know it’s a recognized feature. And I’ve had “friend requests” to which I always respond positively. What I don’t get is what it does that just being a member of the forum doesn’t. Aren’t we all friends? Confused.
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Elle replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
This reads better and I like that ending much better. One thing I think it’s missing at least for me are smell, colours, touch, little details that makes a scene come alive and differentiate it from other stories. For example, the smells in the nursing home, or when you said the restaurant was shabby, how was it shabby are we talking mismatched…[Read more]
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JT. replied to the topic Flash Fiction Win – posted in the right place now, I hope ๐ in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Brilliant news! You must be dancing!
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JT. replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
That’s absolutely fantastic news! Well deserved. Break open the bubbly!
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Bella replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
How lovely. I’m very happy for you.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
This sounds wonderful news. Hearty congratulations. Write on, Kaz!
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Athelstone posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago
I feel another tip coming on. Desperate to retrieve something from the Word Cloud? Do you know some distinctive word or phrase in the text? Well, it’s worth a try, but prepare for disappointment. While the Cloud was up and about, Google cached a lot of its content on its own servers. It does this with many sites to speed up searches. So you could…[Read more]
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Elle replied to the topic Flash Fiction Win – posted in the right place now, I hope ๐ in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Congratulations! Read the winning story and it is beautiful and well deserved 1st place.
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Elle replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
That’s amazing news! Congratulations! Please keep us updated, especially one you have a publication date.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Receiving an email headed 'Offer of Representation'…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Oh. My. Giddy. Aunt! Amazing news! So pleased for you!
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