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Squidge replied to the topic Den monthly competition September 2018 in the forum Competitions, Open calls and Writing Opportunities 7 years, 9 months ago
At the very least, it needs a trigger warning…
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Amanda Berriman (Skylark) replied to the topic Contract finally sorted! in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
YES!!! So blooming proud of you :-* Can’t wait to get my hands on it xxx
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Amanda Berriman (Skylark) replied to the topic A Brief History of York Festivals in the forum Blogs 7 years, 9 months ago
Still smiling 🙂 🙂 🙂
I’m halfway through a blog post about the festival – but also still catching up on sleep! -
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RichardB replied to the topic Book 2 of Oath and Crown out soon in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Yes, when I first started on An Argument, I kept thinking ‘Who’s that?’ and ‘What’s going on here?’ I soon got into it, but a straight-through read would avoid those little glitches.
So what’s your last NF book? I’ve lost track. Flying to the Edge?
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RichardB replied to the topic Book 2 of Oath and Crown out soon in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
As the frog said, ‘Read it.’ I’m not that big on historical fiction and it took me a while to get into An Argument of Blood (though it turned out to be worth it), but A Black Matter for the King is a corker and had me gripped from first to last.
Aelfgifa (can’t do the dipthong) is a really compelling character, which is all the more impressive…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago
Is this the kind of thing peeps meant? Still needs a tweak or two, yet, but…
By Tilda’s twenty-sixth attempt to produce an illuminorb, Silviu’s patience was wearing thin.
“Concentrate, Tilda,” the Ambakian powermage snapped.
“I am concentrating.” Tilda rubbed her palm against her trouser leg. It felt hot; surely she must’ve been close to…[Read more]
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Squidge posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
OK – Testing, because a minute ago I was locked out of my own thread…
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RichardB replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
So would I.
‘We had two bags of grass, seventy-five pellets of mescaline, five sheets of high-powered blotter acid, a saltshaker half-full of cocaine, and a whole galaxy of multi-colored uppers, downers, screamers, laughers… Also, a quart of tequila, a quart of rum, a case of beer, a pint of raw ether, and two dozen amyls.’
Er, no…
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RichardB replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
He left out ‘Take the dope, take the dope, take the dope.’ Though i’m not sure what the equivalent would be for writers.
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Squidge replied to the topic As an opening… in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago
Thanks Jonathan, Raine – more food for thought!
Glad you’d read on, though… 😉
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RichardB replied to the topic Contract finally sorted! in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
So glad to hear this, Claire. I don’t recall hearing anything from you since you blogged on the Cloud about your first meeting with your agent, and that seems ages ago (though yes, glacial pace is about it). I’ve been wondering what happened, so this is all the more welcome. Congratulations.
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Pinkbelt replied to the topic Contract finally sorted! in the forum Podium 7 years, 9 months ago
Nice one CJ. I’ll look forward to it.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago
Thanks Lorraine. To some extent you’re reading my mind! I’ve changed the opening, she’s on a three day pass, we’re down to one policeman, added sensory bits, edited, edited. Your comments are very helpful. I think I might just put it on my website.
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RichardB replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
I believe Hemingway also gave that tip about stopping in the middle of a scene, Raine, so you’re in good company there.
Though as it happens I am at this moment taking a break (all right, procrastinating) from struggling to get back into the middle of a scene…
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