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GippsGirl posted an update in the group
A Room with a View 8 years agoThere’s an awful lot of meanness going on around here. I vote ‘generous’ coz that’s just the kinda gal I am.
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Sophie Jonas-Hill replied to the topic First chapter – Spider's path in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
Thank you for commenting, feel positive and have a good sense of where to go with this – thank you!
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Philippa East replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
Oh, and don’t withdraw other subs till you have signed the contract with the agent (in case it falls through)
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Philippa East replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
Oh – and it’s worth emailing the other agents with ‘Offer of Representation’ in the subject line. This will make sure they pick up your email and act on it.
This post has guidance on all kinds of follow-up emails that you might have to send…
http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/submissions/status-updates-when-and-how-to-do-it/
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Philippa East replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
Picking up on Pinkbelts question a few comments back (yes, what happened on this thread??) – what to say to other agents if you get an offer of representation…
The courteous thing to do is to contact those other agents and let them know – before you accept – that you’ve had an offer. Those agents should then hurry up and get back to you,…[Read more]
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Woolleybeans replied to the topic Guidance on writing about mental health topics in the forum Marketplace 8 years ago
This is basically what I write about. π Awesome.
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Philippa East replied to the topic Guidance on writing about mental health topics in the forum Marketplace 8 years ago
You’re welcome! It’s a nice way for me to bridge my two “identities” (writer and psychologist) xx
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Do the wurds.
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Do them. I miss your wurdz @woolleybeans
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Squidge posted an update 8 years ago
@raine – found it. The kitchen saga…
Basically, we have a worktop that is not level (actually goes the ‘wrong’ way so water runs away from the sink) with the point where the join is on that worktop opened up. We have self opening drawers because they were not put in level. Or floor was re-screed for times before it was good enough to lay vinyl…[Read more]-
And apologies – just read this through and it seems my u is not working very well on the keyboard! Pshhh. Authors. You’d think they’d check their spellings, wouldn’t you? (And of course the blasted u has worked perfectly all through this post…)
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π I have a w that doesn’t work on my laptop keyboard, and a slightly sticky shift button on my external keyboard! I blame the complete lack of dusting.
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I blame the fellas eating at the keyboard – the crumbs get stuck underneath, especially on the lap top π
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Raine replied to the topic Getting an Agent. in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
Oh I love what KIt de Waal is doing – she is being so incredibly supportive and generous setting up scholarships and all that. One admirable lady. *swoons* I’d not really kept track of Kerry Hudson, but I’ll check her out.
That’s true re lots of them having MAs, I guess it hadn’t really registered. I’d never think anyone has become an agent…[Read more]
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Squidge posted an update 8 years ago
@raine – what on earth had I posted that sounded so horrendous?! Not been on for a few days, so it’s all disappeared off the wall…
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John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 8 years ago
Remember “Memories” in the critique section? Now it’s “Felicity’s First” at Across The Margin: http://acrossthemargin.com/felicitys-first/
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John S Alty replied to the topic Flash Fiction Win – posted in the right place now, I hope π in the forum Podium 8 years ago
Belated congratulations, Janette, super job.
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Jonathan replied to the topic First chapter – Spider's path in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
Contentwise it is all good and fine. Oh – “Black Shug, black shug” – that’s really creepy, like a chant. And there are some great lines and expressions in here. Stylistically, as it is now, I would want a little more editing to happen before I would be ready to read on, but that may be a matter of personal taste. The tense seems to change a little…[Read more]
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Not something I imagined would happen when we were chewing over it a few months back
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I thought we agreed we wouldn’t allow hitting
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Oh Gosh, you’re 100% right. I remember now. Also, no biting, gouging or spoon scooping action. That last one almost got through if I recall, but was thrown out on a recount after somebody was shown to have voted for it 17 times. Canβt remember who that was now.
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Spoons!
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StellaOlivetti replied to the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
Yay! Well done, John. I did really find this horrible (in a good way). The only thing that jumped out at me (in a bad way) was the use of “seductive” to describe her smile, but that had gone anyway by the second edit.
Stella
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[worried about lack of generosity] I think you need to post this on the chitchat topic.
Be mean to all those meanies…
I laughed when I saw your reply (you know I can be mean, too!) π
Must confess, I’m getting a bit lost around here, and I usually have an excellent sense of direction.
I know what you mean! No, about the sense of direction.
And I hadnβt meant to be pointed about meanness, in any way.
Rest assured, I didn’t take it like that!