Daedalus

Back up one level to the ‘Critiques’ forum and set up a new topic, JT

That’s great Elle. What’s the story? Haven’t come across Barren magazine, will look it up. Do let us know when the story is published

What’s ‘normal folk’, Precious?

Wow, well done Philippa! Although I’m not in the least bit surprised 😉

Hi Elle, thanks for posting this, I really enjoyed reading it. There were some lovely lines. I liked ‘The ends of his sentences never curved into questions’. I loved the structure and the slow reveal through the different episodes. As Jane said, I’d never have known it wasn’t written by a native English speaker. Part of my ‘day job’ is editing boo…[Read more]

It’s not looking good :-/

Thanks all! I’m excited about this one. It has the big battles and moral quandries.

In case anyone missed the first book, here’s the Amazon page for the duology https://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B07FMC8FPB?ref=series_rw_dp_labf

I was already signed up to shortstops but I’m quite happy for people to post things that they see here too, even if they are duplicated elsewhere – I often miss things in the email list and it helps to have reinforcement