Sophie Jonas-Hill

CAUTION: some self-harm

Hello again,

Second story I need help with. Same again, I need help with grammar, spelling and also for people to let me know if it all makes sense, or if anything comes across as confusing.

Thanks!

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The light was too bright, an artificial sun of modern technology. It turned her eyes into slits and…[Read more]

So I am kicking things of. I have a couple of stories I want to submit around but not being English native I want to make sure there are no grammar or spelling mistakes. Plus I want to know if the story works as I experimenting a bit with format and POV.

Thanks for letting me know what you think.

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Sat in the backseat of…[Read more]

As requested, here is a copy of the cover letter I used on submission. It wasn’t actually the version I sent my now-agent Sarah Manning back in 2016, because I didn’t even know to write a proper cover letter the first time I went to FoW, but this is the one I was using when I formally submitted to agents in 2017.

This one was for my one-to-one…[Read more]

First of all – someone else really has to post an achievement in this section soon or I’m going to start feeling really selfconscious…

Secondly – it’s only a couple of days to go before the launch of @jillybean ‘s and my Norman Conquest novel A Black Matter for the King, and Historical Fiction Blog Tours has an exclusive excerpt to start the…[Read more]